MAGIC
SEGMENT 1
Frank Pyburn tossed another log into the fireplace, poured two fingers bourbon into his coffee and settled into his easy chair. With joints that ached, he ran a gnarled hand through a shock of white hair. The newest Zane Grey novel lay on the table next to his chair. He kicked off his worn boots, switched on the lamp and reached for it.
That man sure knew how to write a good western.
Frank grunted a little as he settled in and reached for the coffee. The burn felt good and warmed him on the inside.
“Ah,” he said to no one.
After he found his reading glassed under a two-day pile of newspapers, he opened the book.
Halfway through the first chapter, the sound of hooves clomping across his front porch brought him to his feet.
“Damn bears again,” he muttered. “But, since when did bears grow hooves?”
He slipped on his boots and grabbed the Winchester propped beside the door.
“Who’s out there?” He yelled.
A loud whinny cut through the cold Montana air, followed by a snort and a hoof pawing on the wood.
Frank cursed and eased the front door open two inches. He peered out with one eyeball. A saddled brown pony with no rider stamped his foot and nickered.
“Who’s out there?” Frank yelled again.
The horse tossed his head and let out a long whinny.
Frank swung the door open wide and stepped out into the porchlight, gun cocked and aimed.
The horse backed off the porch and continued to toss his head and nicker.
When Frank saw no one, he walked toward the horse and grabbed the trailing reins. “Good boy.” He patted the horse’s thick neck.
“Where’s your rider?”
The horse pulled against the reins and reared.
“Whoa, boy. Whoa.” Frank kept a tight grip on the leather.
The horse jerked against Frank’s hold and whinnied.
“You’re trying to tell me something, aren’t you, boy?” Frank peered into the cold blackness of the night. His gut told him someone was in trouble. “All right. I’ll go with you, you stubborn horse, but I’ve got to get my coat and gloves.”
He pulled on the reins and the horse followed him. “Damned if this don’t beat all. The coldest night of the year and you’re gonna drag me away from my warm fire. You better have a good reason.”
If someone was in trouble, this weather would freeze a person to death in no time.
He tied the horse to the porch rail and stepped back into the warmth of the small ranch house. He shot a longing glance at the fire, his book and the rest of his coffee while he slammed his hat on his head, slipped into his heaviest coat and gloves.
The minute he swung up into the saddle, the horse spun around and took off.
To Be Continued…
Ok, I’m hooked 🙂
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Yay!!!! Music to my ears. 🙂
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We need one of those logs on the fire here in Reno.. it is freezing cold! i Just had to turn up the heat here when He went back outside..
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Yesterday it was near eighty degrees here in Texas, but today was cold. I wished for a fire. 🙂 Thanks for stopping by, Elaina!
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What a nice surprise. I’ll ride along to see who’s out in the snow.
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Because you just never know. 🙂 Thanks, Craig.
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To be continued…no! You have me hooked. I love the pictures and the scene you set. I can’t wait to see where this horse takes him.
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Thanks for dropping by and sharing my fire, D.L. Yes, we shall see where the horse takes him. 🙂
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Wow! Loving this, Jan. You sure have grabbed my attention! I look forward to the next part.
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Oh, thank you Sooz!! That means SO much coming from you. Thank you for joining us.
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A pleasure, my friend.
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Nice, Jan.You’ve really set the stage.Can’t wait to see what happens next!
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Thanks, Mae. It will be interesting to see what Christmas Magic is in store for Frank! 🙂
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I could hear the fire crackling, Jan. 😀 Well done. This is a great beginning. Hugs.
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Thank you, Teagan. I’m glad you pulled up a chair by my fire. 🙂
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Oh, man Jan. This one got me with the two fingers of bourbon in the coffee. I can’t wait to see where he is taken.
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Happy to share my bourbon with you, John, and my fire. Pull up a chair and we’ll see where this story goes. :
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Boots are off now. Oops maybe I should have changed those socks.
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I love the story already! The contrasts (outside/inside, human and animal, safety and danger) got me and I’m riveted. I just wish I didn’t have to wait a whole week until the next episode. Great job, Jan. 🙂
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Oh, what kind words, Gwen. I’m so glad you like the start to this story. 🙂
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I got my gloves on and am hanging on….
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Good idea, Annette! So glad you could join me today!
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Intriguing, interesting, and peeked my interest. I’m on the edge of my chair and I can’t turn the page! You have me in suspense!
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Hi, Judy. I’m so glad you joined me and even more happy that I have you on the edge of your chair. Hugs!
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Very good start of your story and you have me hooked too. Just have to know who
and what the horse is taking Frank too…
Looking out for next instalment.
miriam
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Thank you, Mirian!! I’m thrilled that I got your attention and interest. 🙂 Hugs!
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Oh, you’re such a tease, sister! You immediately drew me into the story with the atmosphere and warmth, then the mystery….that will keep me riveted. Excellent job! You’re a born storyteller if I ever saw one. Big hugs!
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Oh thank you, sister! Your words are too kind. But, I’m thrilled that I drew you into the story. 🙂 Now to see what Frank finds out in the cold. Love you!
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Just when I was going to find out what happened next in that Zane Grey book, I have to put it down. Now another mystery, who is outside in the cold, and where are they?
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Thank you, Veda, for leaving a comment. I am thrilled that I got your interest. And, you will find out who is outside in the cold next week, I promise. 🙂
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Jan- good morning!! WOW!! Talk about leaving us hanging.. oh I loved this and I can’t wait for segment 2. Who will he find???
Love and hugs!!!
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I love that it has your attention, Tonya. 🙂 I will have another segment next Sunday. And, you will discover who he finds. 🙂 Hugs!!
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Don’t tell a person WHEN it’s going to be continued!!!
Never mind, I.m hooked on your blog anyway so I won’t miss the next bit..
Love the falling snow affect on the Christmas background.
Hugs, Sarah xx
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Thanks, Sarah. I will finish the story by Christmas. 🙂
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