It is my pleasure today to host this special author who has written many books designed to help folks through potentially hard situations. Today, she talks about adding emotion to non-fiction writing. Meet Author, Harriet Hodgson!
Adding Emotion to Non-Fiction Writing
By Harriet Hodgson
I’m a non-fiction writer. Whether it is for young children, teens or adults, all of my writing contains emotion. Sometimes my emotions are detailed in descriptive sentences. Other times they are expressed with dialogue. Writing about emotions takes effort and often includes pain.
Why should you bother to add emotions to your writing? There are many pluses and these are the key ones.
Emotion links the author and reader. Rob Parnell, in his Easy Way to Write website article, “How to Write About Emotion,” says emotions make us uniquely human. Life isn’t all about what happens, he continues, “it is the way we react to events and people and the things they say that defines our experience of the world.”
All of my books contain emotion. In fact, emotion is why I write them. My recent work focuses on loss, grief, and grief recovery. I wrote these books to identify, track and grow from the roiling emotions I was feeling at the time. Readers can see my journey in the words I write and the outcome in my latest book about finding happiness again.
Emotion may serve as a “hook.” Dialogue is one way to hook a reader, according to Mary Jaksch. She expands this point in her Write to Done website article, “3 Things You Need to Know about Using Dialogue in Non-Fiction.” What makes dialogue a hook? According to Jaksch, it works “because it makes a story t of mere information.” That’s why many newspaper articles open with a quote.
Decades of writing experience have taught me that you have to set the stage for emotion. You can’t just slap it in the middle of a page and consider yourself done. Usually, I cite a resource from the bibliography, explain my reaction to this information, and tell how I used it.
Emotion stirs the reader. Steve Zousmertells how an author may stir the reader in his “Writer’s Digest” article, “Evoke Emotions in Your Readers, published in the November 2009 issue. A mistake many biographers and memoir writers make, according to Zousmer, is getting caught up in chronology. The success of this kind of writing depends on the author’s ability to see his or her story as more than a procession of events, Zousmer notes.
His comment made me think of my own writing. My elder daughter and father-in-law died the same weekend. One week later, I sat down in front of the computer and started to pour out my soul in words. Many of these articles were posted on the Internet and they eventually became a book. Shocked as I was, overcome with grief as I was, I somehow had the sense to arrange the articles in topical order, not chronological.
Emotion helps the reader to remember facts. Psychologists like my younger daughter know people remember emotions more easily than facts. Still, I know when I add emotion to my non-fiction writing that I have to sound sincere, credible, and stable.

Harriet Hodgson, Health and Wellness Author

Rochester, Minnesota resident Harriet Hodgson has been a freelance writer for 38 years, is the author of thousands of articles, and 36 books. She has a BS from Wheelock College in Boston, an MA from the University of Minnesota, and additional graduate training.
Hodgson is a member of the Association of Health Care Journalists and the Alliance of Independent Authors (ALLi). She is a contributing writer for the Open to Hope Foundation, The Grief Toolbox, and The Caregiver Space websites. Visit www.thecaregiverspace.org/authors/hhodgson to read her articles.
Hodgson has appeared on more than 185 talk radio shows, including CBS Radio, dozens of television stations, including CNN, and dozens of blog talk radio programs. A popular guest, she has given presentations at public health, Alzheimer’s, bereavement, and caregiving conferences.
Her recent work is based on Hodgson’s 21 years as a family caregiver. She was her mother’s family caregiver for nine years, her twin grandchildren’s guardian and caregiver for seven years, and is in her fifth year as her disabled husband’s caregiver. Visit www.harriethodgson.com for more information about this busy wife, grandmother, caregiver, and author.
www.writelife.com harriethodgson@charter.net
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Hi Harriet. I’m a non fiction writer too. It was emotions that brought me into this world of writers. I will go over your points again. Thank you Jan for hosting.
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Thanks for visiting and leaving a comment, Shirley!
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Harriet is a remarkable person who has given so much of herself. I had the privilege of meeting her and her husband several years ago. Harriet, congratulations on your tour. Jan, thank you for hosting her.
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Oh, how wonderful, Karen. We hardly ever get to meet each other in person, so that is special. Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving a comment! Hugs!
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Thanks Karen. Congratulations on your books and for helping with RRBC.
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Another great post, Harriet. I have been enjoying following your tour.
Thanks for always being so supportive of other authors, Jan. You are incredible.
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It is my pleasure to support other authors, Beem. And I agree that this is a great post from Harriet. She is such an inspiration! Thanks for stopping by!
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Thanks, Rhani!
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Hi, Harriet. I asolutely agree that emotion helps a reader connect to a character or situation.
It was great to stop by again, Jan. Thanks for hosting.
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Such a great post, Harriet!! Jan, thank you once again for hosting on your lovely site.
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It’s always a pleasure, Mar! Thanks for stopping by!
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Harriet, I know what you mean by emotions. As a memoir writer, myself, although I am in the middle of the. story, I am usually able to capture the vibes of all the happenings around me. 😀
Thank you, Jan, for hosting.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving a comment for Harriet, Joy! It is super important to capture the emotions whether it’s fiction or non-fiction.
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Thanks for hosting Jan. I appreciate your kindness and help.
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Absolutely, Harriet! Sorry I posted a day early. 🙂 I suppose better early than late. Best wishes!
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Best wishes, Harriet. Thanks for sharing. Thank you, Jan for hosting.
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Thanks, John!
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I understand the overwhelmingly helpless feeling of sudden loss. When I wrote my memoirs I found myself doing as Ernest Hemingway once said: “All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.” Thank you for sharing your wonderful insights, Harriet. And thank you, Jan for hosting today.
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Hemingway’s description could not be more apropos, Soooz. Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving a comment. I accidentally posted this a day early, so Harriet will be around tomorrow to respond to everyone’s comments. 🙂
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That is SO true, Mae. Writing has helped many overcome horrible times in their lives. I cannot imagine the enormous helping of grief Harriet and her family were served up that weekend. Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving a comment for her!
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Such a terrible loss of loved ones in one short weekend. Writing is often therapeutic and emotion is a powerful element in fiction and non-fiction both. It’s how I connect with characters in fiction, events, topics and people in non-fiction. Wishing Harriet all the best.
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Very thoughtful post, Harriet. Your books have helped me and family members manage difficult challenges. Thank you for providing words for situations that are complex and difficult. Thank you, Jan, for hosting dear Harriet. ♥
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What a beautiful testament, Gwen! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs!
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Thanks for reading my article and taking the time to comment Gwen.
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Wow, this sounds like an amazing book. Today it seems many couples & single grandparents are raising their grandchildren.
Thanks for sharing.
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That is so true, Tonya. It is more common than one might think. I appreciate you leaving a comment for Harriet!
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This is very thoughtful! The kinds of wonderful ideas you express in SO, YOU’RE RAISING YOUR GRANDKIDS! are best imprinted emotionally. Caught in a challenging situation, grandparents will be emotional. Remembering they felt that way reading your book reminds them of your specific suggestions. They will be emotionally prepared to apply what they’ve learned from you. You know that, and you write to encourage it. Brava. Thanks to you and Jan for teaming up to make this happen.
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Thanks for stopping by, Stephen. I agree that Harriet has made some great points here in her post and you make a good point as well. I appreciate your comment!
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Thanks for your comments Stephen, especially the “atta girl” part.
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Great post about emotions in non-fiction writing Harriet. How you were able to “pour out your soul into words” is not only healing but such a gift to all of us. You give very valid tips on writing non-fiction that we can all find very useful, thank you. I have to move your books up my reading list. Thanks for hosting Jan.
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Thank you, Denise. I agree that Harriet made some great points about putting emotions into non-fiction. I just realized I was supposed to post this tomorrow. 🙂 Ooops! Oh well, better early than late!
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Much better than being late, I agree Jan 🙂
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Thanks for reading my article D.L. and for taking the time to comment.
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